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Recently,there are more and more people get depressed due to the pressure of hard work or other circumstances.This is being called the cold heart in psychology.People who get a cold heart often can not be in the good mood.Even worse,they may think about death.So how can those people live a happy life?Not to mention they could not work efficiently.Therefore,living with a good mood can be necessary,even crucial. A few college students even high school students chose to suicide because of the high pressure of learning and employment.What they miss is not only the bright future but also the meaning of life.They may not have the conception whenever we are faced with problems,they are always a kind of lessons we should take to adapt ourselves to the society.However,some successful people always adjust to the tricky envrionment. However difficult the problem is,we should always keep a good mind,not just for the efficiency of our work or learning but also for our daily life.