小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, her name is Cao Xianhong, she is a pretty girl and she has big eyes.She loves smiling all the time ,so everyone like to play with her, because she can bring hanppiness to others. what is more,she is willing to help anyone who confronts with difficulties no matter how busy she is. This is friend, she is really exceedingly helpful,I love her very much!