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江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
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2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
TThe survey report about myopia The survey shows that primary myopia rate rise sharply, According to the table, The pupils, high myopia rate x% show ascendant trend. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time. In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes. I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes, must be strictly e ye exercises and try our best to protect them.
