邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

How to improve school safety I'm deeply impressed by the terrible cruel things have taken place over past tow years in the school. Some people was very bad.They thought that our society unequally.So they want to hurt children by kill them.It'so terrible.From many cruel tings our government was worried.They thought we will have a security guard to protect campus safety so that children can't be hurt .It's very important. The teacher can increase work for school safety make children study hard .Don't worried.And we can ask for the whole society help. It's love and concern that have brought about great changes in the school. Many hands bring light work.Union is strength.