邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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last Sunday, i went sightseeing with my friends in the Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring,with the sun shinning and birds singing.When i was enjoying the fantastic scenery around ,something unpleasant caught my eye.A young man couple in a boat were eating,talking,laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.What' s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake,totally ignoring the noticeable sign"No Littering'' nearby.What a shame. Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Lake Park do as the couple did,the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.