GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

It is claim of the author that science reassures us while the purpose of arts is to upset our thought. Even although it's in the opposite conjunction, and I think it is two aspects of field of study. I don't support this statement and cannot match the meaning of the science. it is true that science provides the logical conclusion of the various issues or phenomenons which are constantly happening around us. It's true that science open our eye to construe everything with logical reason. It liberates us from our doubt, and superstition. It is because of science that technology advances rapidly. However, it is true that science can reassures us, but it doesn't make our life completely. Sometime, it only makes us dull and insipid. It is art with its splendid presentation that make our life variegated. Art is variety and amplitude make us consummate as human being. If there had not been MONA-LISA, we wouldn't have appreciated the beauty of women. Without DA VINCI or MICHELANGELO we would be looking at the world of imagination. Its same apply to poetry and plays and novels. These help us understand the relationship between human being and the world through the eye of the historic people who give us sometimes illusive, sometimes practical and sometimes hedonistic glimpse of our society, and the creature make up the society. It teaches us to believe in ourselves. Thus to conclusion my opinion, I would like to assert and affirm that art is also an integral part of our life, like science, and it plays a pivotal role in shaping our society. It is sometime practical, often utopian but it still gives us an introspective. It is impregnable and spotless effect of human being society cannot be debased or denigrate.