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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中较丰富地使用学术词汇，但单词拼写错误较多；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Recently, the problem of excessive packaging has been brought into public focus. When you go to shopping ,you may notice this phenomenon that more and more people are fond to buy luxurious goods, in addition to requiring beautiful packaging. Should we use excessive packing, that's a question. There are various reasons responsible for this emarrassing situation. For one thing,some people thing the high quality is associated with goods.Moreover,they attach important to purchase excessive packing goods.For another, those who want to resprent status, they spend more money on gifts. That is to say, they want to reap the benefit from ohers. From my perspect , it's essential that effective measures must be taken to cope with this problem. On the one hand, we should pay attention to environmental problem.Package is not easy decay , it's cause to pollute. On the other hand,current development should in accordiance with economy.Excessive packaging not only waste money but also destory the environment .In conclusion it's necessary to strengthen the ties between economy and environment.
