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Last weekend,I interviewed the professor of psychology Kelly Lam,and talked about Chinese students' view on feeling of sharing with him.More than 30% students are unwilling to share with others whether they are happy or sad.Students often ignore the importance of sharing because of Chinese education.In expert's opinion,It's very important for us to learn to share in the age that we live.We should learn to how to share our feeling because it make our growth better in the future.