2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

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With the development of technology,there are many electronic products appearing on the market.And they are becoming more and more popular.you can see many people use electronic products on the street.Even a growing number of schools are embracing computers to replace the traditional textbooks.Some people say such revolution indicates that books' position as the main way of getting knowledge has been challenged.But as far as I am concerned,printed books are still the major means of acquiring knowledge. Firstly, printed books are more convinent and memorable.Although the electronic products are convinient to carry,you can't take notes or write down your feelings about the content while you are reading.When you finished reading a book through electronic products,you will delete it .But print books can be kept for a long time.When you want to read books you have read before,you can see the notes and your feelings that you wrote before.So most people would like to choose printed books to acquire knowledge. Secondly,reading through print books is good for our health.Electronics are bad for our health,seriously,it may make us blind if we spend too much time on it.It is known to us all that electronics have radiation which is bad for us.So people would choose a safer way to acquire knowledge. Maybe there are many people who are using electronics mow,but after some time,they will find that print books are better than the electronic products.