高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；从句使用不错，但句式变化不明显；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Hello everybody, I am Zhi. You know, help each other to make the world more wonderful! We should encounter difficulties in students to help him do so you will be sincere friendship. We should spend his time alone in the elderly, you will be happy to do so. Patients suffering we should comfort him, you will be happy to do so. We help each other at the same time, they themselves would feel happy. Help each other to make the world more wonderful!