高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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If have eight weeks, I can have a day to grandma's, because I have classes from Monday to five, time is very nervous. By Saturday, assignments and so many, is a big problem how to get ready to play, sometimes on Sunday haven't finished writing my homework. If there are eight weeks much good, so, I wrote my homework on Sunday also need not worry, because there are eight weeks can go to grandma's to play on a whole day. If week not grandma's eight elder brother, I called my mother took me to the stone scissors cloth, or go to times square to play, if my mother didn't take me to, then I can play computer at home, if mom says no, then I paint, painting mother should promise. So, weekend homework, play eight weeks I'll let go.