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Learning to smlie is important to us very much.If we can do it in our lives, they will be full of happiness. Of course,somebody may ask how to smile,in fact, smliing is very easy.It can take us confidence and pleasure.First, we should be happy to face everything.Sncond,we should be friendly to others to make them feel happy.Third,we are support to do somrthing good to make the world better.If we try our best do these things,the world will be more and more beautiful,don't you think so?