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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1891
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Along with the rapid development of society, our life becomes more colorful and we need to communicate with many people or touch with some things every day. Therefore, we have to use a word "No ". As a result, it is necessary thing that we learn to say it. Here I will share the view of me with you, and I hope it is beneficial for you. When and how should we say "No "? I suppose we might say "no " here and there. As a student, the teacher will ask whether you have understood. At that time, if you have confusion, you should say "No " without question. What's more, we meet many situations where we have to say "no " in our life, because it can explicitly express our feelings. Sometimes, however, you not say "No " straightly, but you have said it indirectly. To name only a few, your friends invite you to go to the movies, but you have to do an important thing. For that reason, you might say "certainly, I'd love to, but you see I have an important thing to be done ". That words have same mean with "no ", and it can let other understand that you refuse to do something. Accordingly, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that we should learn to say "no ". The dilemma is something that no one can avoid. Properly handled, however, we will keep the balance between with persons and things well. Now, let's go to learn how to say "no ".

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