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Along with the rapid development of society, our life becomes more colorful and we need to communicate with many people or touch with some things every day. Therefore, we have to use a word "No ". As a result, it is necessary thing that we learn to say it. Here I will share the view of me with you, and I hope it is beneficial for you. When and how should we say "No "? I suppose we might say "no " here and there. As a student, the teacher will ask whether you have understood. At that time, if you have confusion, you should say "No " without question. What's more, we meet many situations where we have to say "no " in our life, because it can explicitly express our feelings. Sometimes, however, you not say "No " straightly, but you have said it indirectly. To name only a few, your friends invite you to go to the movies, but you have to do an important thing. For that reason, you might say "certainly, I'd love to, but you see I have an important thing to be done ". That words have same mean with "no ", and it can let other understand that you refuse to do something. Accordingly, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that we should learn to say "no ". The dilemma is something that no one can avoid. Properly handled, however, we will keep the balance between with persons and things well. Now, let's go to learn how to say "no ".