拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;可以适当增加副词的使用。
In my opinion,private car owners should be taxed for pollution,because I think it is an effective way to control the number of car and reduce pollution in the city. As we all known,the car pollution is almost caused by two reason.One is the increasing amount of private car.The more cars we have,the more pollution we will produce.So the first thing we have to do is to limit the amount of cars.However,with the development of economic,more and more people are dying for car.I believe that people's buying idea will be effected in some extent because of the car tax.Another is the technology problem.If we can improve our technology of car production,we can reduce the car pollution.But we need money to promote the technology,thus,car tax can provide some capital except the government support. As far as I am concerned,with the development of technology and economic,environmental pollution will be solved.As we learned from text,the problems technology has created,technology can solve.
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