单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
There are three teacher to have class to us,English;math;Chinese teacher.I like English teacher very much.she is a beautiful lady and she speak English very fluently.She is very nice and kind-hearted woman but she is strict to our leaning.She talk to us that we can be useful through the efforts.our math teacher is a kind people .