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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;请注意分段。
From where I'm stand,that all the measures we take to save our money makes us smart consumers.The reasons are following: Firstly,as a consumer,those would save our money when we look for group- by deals or buy something in its sale.Secondly,we can make full use of the things we bought and save our socity's resources. so I think it is smart to do those.