高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；作者词汇基础较薄弱，要注意积累学术词汇，单词拼写要认真；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

last,home town is around the trees .there were all kinds of fish in the river.our house is poor and the stree is shadow.people's life is poor.now,our town has bend built variety buildings.in the stree,lots of vehicals are running.because industry develop,the environment go to bad.what's more,trees diminish ,and fish.the most of important is curing environment.