新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；简单句偏多，应增加从句使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

Dear David: Welcome to my home town,lanzhou.In the letter,you told me that you wanted to learn Chinese well.In my eyes,I think you should take a right approach.First,you may create a great environment for your learning Chinese.Searen,you can listen some Chinese songs or read Chinese newspaper or machines.Third,you must have a good habit in your study.Above all,there are some suggestion from my experience.I hope you can learn Chinese in my help. Your friend: Chen quan