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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Actually,as far as I am concerned,saving money is necessary.As a student,the money we use is mainly from our parents.The amount is limited.It should covers the expense of our daily life.For another thing,the money comes in a difficult way.If we spend it in a early age,it means that the following days,we will have a tough time. For instance,one classmates of mine once cost his money at the beginning of the month,as a consequence,he really surveyed a lot.He had no fee to have meals,let alone went out for sightseeing.We were sorry for him.Finally,we shared our food with him together.And he was also moved.Had he saved the money,the awkward situation would not have happened. From that thing ,we were deeply impressed∶never use money ahead of schedule,for you do not have other source.In a word,saving for tomorrow is better than spending in advance,for you can not predict what will take place then.
