2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion,there are following advantage on the internet.First,we can obtain lots of information on the internet.Second,if we use computer by right approach,it can contribute to learn.Last and the most,computer devotes to help us to get some friends. However,one coin has two sides.if we abuse computer,it may hurt us in our life.For example,we may meet cheaters on the internet.What's more,people always spent lots of time on it.If we do it,computer waste our precious time.