题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误;请注意分段。
Nowadays,computer take a great role in our life that we can use it do what we want to do.Our life is more comfortable with the computer. however,everything has two saids ,computer also has the effect while help pople .so we should know how to use it usefully.Such as the information is used by some pepole unleage ,and some children was indecate in omputer games ,which effect their study .