2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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As far as I am concerned,we human beings and computers have deep relationships.First of all,with the development of technology,computers play a more and more important rule.It is possible for us to have difficulties in working or studying.we cannot live well without computer.Secondly,we can use computers to do a lot of things to help us in our daily life.In a word,computer is important for men's lives.