2005年12月24日英语四级作文真题:名校校园旅游

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus. During the May Day Holiday,National Day Holiday,summer and winter vacations,many University campuses become popular tourist sites. In my opinion,university campus should be open to tourists. In fact,there are many royal gardens and parks,all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities. Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students. Besides this,as more tourists come to visit universities,these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism. In a word,I think the university campus should be open to the tourists.