2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

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ast,home town is around the trees .there were all kinds of fish in the river.our house is poor and the stree is shadow.people's life is poor.now,our town has bend built variety buildings.in the stree,lots of vehicals are running.because industry develop,the environment go to bad.what's more,trees diminish ,and fish.the most of important is curing environment.