题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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It is believed that the computer can do almost every thing. At the time the computer was invented, scientists, carried away by its calculat speed, felt that they created a miracle. It was gradually used not only in mathematic, physic, chemistry and astronomy, but in places like the library, hospital and military army to replace the work of man. For the work of man. For this reason, the computer was entitled “Electronic Brain” in terms of appreciation. Can the man be controlled by the computer? The answer is negative. Although a computer works much faster and more accurately than man , a fact is undeniable; it is designed, manufactured and programmed by man, and therefore by human beings. Of course, science fictions have made up many fascinating stories about a computer, or rather a robot, who conquers man and the earth, even the whole universe; however, it is only unrealistic imagination. A horse helps man a lot runs much faster than we, but it is only a slave. The future for the computer is very promising. With the help of it, we can do things that could not do before. Conquering the universe, discovering new things, explaining mysteruiys phenomena puzzling us at present are all made possible by computer.