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初中英语命题作文真题演练(79):健康的生活习惯

发布时间:2014-02-18 16:33浏览次数:409
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健康的生活习惯在我们成长中至关重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是什么样子的?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已经给。
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1.healthy eating habits
2.go to bed early and get up early
3.take more exercise.
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

I support that we should own a healthy habits in our life.In this way,we can prolong our life and live fortunately. From my point of view,I think people should adopt conductive suggestions.First,we should get a healthy eating habits if we want to owe a healthy body.Second,sleep is so crucial for our body that we should go to bad early and get up early.Third,it is necessory for us to choose jogging,playing basketball,swimming,skating,climbing or riding as our regular exercises. It's hard to escape the conclusion that healthy habit is necessory for our life.Hence,since a balanced diet and sufficient sleep are both indispensable to physical fitness.we should put great emphasis on good habits.

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