2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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The relation of computer and man is complex.People benefit from computer, meanwhile, destroy because of computer. The most important thing is using the computer properly. But, how should we do? In my opinion, firstly, computer reserved as not noly a game marchine, but also a study utility. We should control our time to play games.