2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing succeeds without a strong wil Now, I talk about a strong will,according to succeed pepole said,it is important that suceeds whose have strong will,and there is able to make great. I think strong will don't only suite succeed pepole,but also us,our studies.because if our have not strong will,our would not achieved A and make great. maybe you watch this essay,you need strong will.sice that you have,let's see then.