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题目:Letter Writing Will Not Be Killed
字数:200满分:100分
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
With the development of society,photos has been paid more attention increasingly.We can not even live without phones but letter writing is also playing an important role in our daily life.For my part,phones will not kill letter writing. In my opinion,phones will not kill letter writing.The reasons are as followed.Firstly,we can use phones to sane messages or call our friends conviently,bue we can not express the most deepest feeling by writing with words.Sencondly,when we need to tell of something about our daily life,it is more expensive for us to call our friends or send messages than letter writing.Thirdly,althought e-books and electronic dictionaries are more and more popular in todays,they cannot replace of the libraries and dictionaries in paper,so the phones also can not kill letter writing. In a word,phones is an important part of our daily life ,but letter writing also a good way for us to express our feeling.They shouldn't be separety in our life and we cannot without them.