2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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nowadays,the world filed with temptation.For example,interesting game that appeal to young people,TV shows,luxurious designer clothes and so on.These kinds of entertainment and goods enriched our life.But they also pose distractions for us to make good habit. To make good habit,we need one strong will perseverance to resist temptation.Fighting back is the important process that forming a good habit.There are some suggestions.First,removing eyes form the websites and focusing on book.The good habit of exercising means repeatedly dragging ourselves away the soap operas.And we should keep a healthy diet that saying "no"to the junk food.In this way,we can keep a good habit and resist temptation.Come on!