2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；能够使用一些简单的从句。

Recently, some people criticismed the charity business and department by their not really to help necessary people . There are some reasons contribute to this phenomenon.For one thing,the government don't pay emphas on supervise so that let someone illegal use the charity money .For other thing,we often see and hear that the news report the charity not use all the money to help people just a part of money. In my opinion ,i think we should take some actions to protect how we sue the money form charity.for example,laws and regulation should be work out and the government should pay more attention to supervise .only in this way are we charity business will become more and more better.