小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my name is SunJing .my best friend name is KongWeina.KongWeina is a girl .she come from china .She is 23 year's old .she is very smart .she is a university student . she favorite colour is black and she favorite food is junk food .she inserted in red book her school name is JiLin GongShang i like her very much