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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
What attitudes should we take to money? Money is not everything, but without money, everything is nothing. ——Aristotle The money is a part of our lives.All of the people have the money.Someone have a lot of money some one have a litter money.Some people think thatmoney is very important somepeople think that money is a thing apart.So I made a statistics. About people's attitudes towards money. I made aquestionnaire. such as If you have five million, what would you do? A. buying a villa, car plug B . wholly donated to Project Hope C.Keep yourself calculating the flower slowly. Your current economic source?A. Parents or relatives to pocket money B. Own work and earn money.There are some otherquestions I wouldnot for example.For the first question Most of the people choice the C.Keep yourself calculating the flower slowly. Your current economic source The second question most of the people choice the A Parents or relatives to pocket money According to oursurvey found thateveryone is not the same attitudes towards moneyocket money.Most people still think that money is a thing apart. Family, friends and health is the most important.Happiness isthe purpose of life.Money is justa way to satisfyyour happy.
