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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

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要求：: 题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：200满分：100分

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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇基础较薄弱，要注意积累学术词汇，单词拼写要认真；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

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The Dargon Boat Festival The Dargon Boat Festival is one of the important national festivals in china. It is to memorize QuYuan, the chinese petrioty poet. And we usually eat ZongZi and held dargon boat races in Dargon Boat Festival. The Dargon Festival falls on the fifth days of fifth lunar months.We will held dargon boat races in that day and many people participate in the races to have a fun or do exercise.And each family will eat ZongZi to celebrate this festival. The Dargon Boat Festival is a significant festival to chinese people.

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