Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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What attitudes should we take to money? Money is not everything, but without money, everything is nothing. ——Aristotle The money is a part of our lives.All of the person have the coin.Someone have a lot of money some one have little money.Some people think that money is extremely important some people think that money is a thing apart.So I made a statistics. About people's attitudes towards money. I made a questionnaire. such as If you have five million, what would you do? A. buying a villa, car plug B . wholly donated to Project Hope C.Keep yourself calculating the flower slowly. Your current economic source?A. Parents or relatives to pocket money B. Own work and earn money.There are some other questions I would not for example.For the first question Most of the people choice the C.Keep yourself calculating the flower slowly. Your current economic source The second question most of the people choice the A Parents or relatives to pocket money According to our survey found that everyone is not the same attitudes towards money ocket money.Most people still think that money is a thing apart. Family, friends and health is the most important.Happiness is the purpose of life.Money is just a way to satisfy your happy.