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As the contemporary society develops dramatically, a phenomenon has sprung up that college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. However, people hold different opinions toward this crazy tendency. Some people hold a firm position that it is a beneficial thing for certificates.To begin with, Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications.What is more, diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one's ability. While for the others, they hold an opposite opinion.They think that it is not necessary to get all kinds of certificates.First and foremost, a good job not has diploma and certificates but qualifications and true ability.Besides, certificate do not necessarily tell our ability. Every coin has two sides. As far as I am concerned, I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates . I think that our students should be more rational when it comes to certificates. Instead, we should be more involved in learning and capability boosting.