2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

从句使用量稍显不足且句子错误偏多；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

computer and man with the development of technology ,our life is easier and easier,for example ,the development between man and computer can describe better and detailed. computer has changed our life in lots of fields ,in life ,in agricuture ,in factory and even in our communication way . howewer,as the old saying ,"one coin has two sides",it definately does harm to our life in some part. adolecense are addicted in surfing the internet ,playing computer games day and night in place of studying at school .cheting in the net make people comfused as we students in the university ,we should do things more important ,learn more technology and know what kind of people ,what kind of life ,and what kind of future do we want ,make full use of technology to improve ourselves.and you ?just come with us and lighten our life for fame ,love and happyness