题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
能够使用一些简单的从句;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
computer and man with the development of technology ,our life is easier and easier,for example ,the development between man and computer can better describe and in detailed. computer has changed our life around us ,in life ,in agriculture ,in factory and even in the communication between people. howewer,as the old saying ,"every coin has two sides",it definitely does harm to our life in some way. adolecence are addicted in surfing the internet ,playing computer games day and nights in place of studying at school .cheting in the net make people comfusion. as we students in the university ,we should do things more important ,learn more technology and know what kind of people ,what kind of life ,and what kind of future do we want ,make full use of technology to improve ourselves.and you ?just come with us and lighten our life for fame ,love and happyness