2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

能够使用一些简单的从句；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；连词使用偏少。

computer and man with the development of technology ,our life is easier and easier,for example ,the development between man and computer can better describe and in detailed. computer has changed our life,in agriculture ,in factory and even in daily life. however,as the old saying ,"every coin has two sides",it definitely does harm to our life in some way. adolecence are addicted in surfing the internet ,playing computer games day and nights in place of studying at school .cheting in the net make people comfusion. as we students in the university ,we should do things more important ,learn more technology and know what kind of people ,what kind of life ,and what kind of future do we want ,make full use of technology to improve ourselves.and you ?just come with us and lighten our life for fame ,love and happness