2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；连词使用偏少。

With the development of technique,our life is easier and easier,for example,the development between man and computer can better describe and in detail. Computer has changed our life,in agriculture,in factory and even in daily life. However,as the old saying,every coin has two sides,it definitely does harm to our life in some way. Adolecent are addicted in surfing the internet,playing computer games day and nights in place of studying at school.Cheting in the net make people confusion. As we students in the university,we should do things more important,learn more technology and know what kind of people,what kind of life,and what kind of future do we want,make full use of technology to improve ourselves.What aboutyou?Just come with us and make our life more sense for fame,love and happiness.