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Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution? Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. I think it is a good idea to reduce pollution and protect environment in our city. If the private cars are limited, the emission of car's gas would reduce.The private car owners will prefer public transportation instead of their car because of the "pollution tax". Actually ,the idea of putting a "pollution tax" on private cars can help people form a good atmosphere to protect environment. It is political to put a "pollution tax" on private cars to appeal people to protect environment.
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