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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46105
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Recently, some people criticismed the charity business and department by their not really help people in need. some reasons contribute to this phenomenon.For one thing,the government don't pay emphas on supervise so that let someone illegal use the charity money .For other thing,we often see and hear that the news report the charity not use all the money to help people just a part of money. In my opinion ,i think we should take some actions to protect how we sue the money form charity.for example,laws and regulation should be work out and the government should pay more attention to supervise .only in this way are we charity business will become more and more better.

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