2007年6月英语四级作文真题:致欢迎辞

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

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