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Welcome to our club There are many activities in our club.Our club is about sports.It births in 2000.There are 245 members in our club.Our club is popular in our school.If you are interested in the sports,please join us.It holds on the basketball,football,baseball game and so on.If you join us.We will schedule the time to go on sports.If you do everything,you will get a healthy body.You will be strong.If you build up every day,you never go to hospital. Fellow students that meet the requirements and want to join in the sports club.Please call us at 6543210 or sent an email to sports@163com.