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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；请注意分段。
Since the advertising is deeply influencing human beings,some people claim that it discourages people from being different individuals via making us all want to do the same as well as look the same. From my perspective,I do agree with that.As advertising covers most of the industries all over the world,its impact becomes stronger day by day.So,an overwhelming majority of the enterprises publicities their new products through advertising.And that can manipulate people's buying behavior whilst some specific brands is going to create fashion.Therefore,these brands may monopolize the market.
