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Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? Tourism is a booming business in our country.But as the fast development of tourism,many tourist bring harm to the environment. There is no doubt that the development of tourism can bring us economic profit and make us know more about the history and culture of china.However,there is also no dyaning that the fast development of tourism increased the environmental pollution in our county.Too many tourists caused too much rubbish that lead to the pollution of environment.Some tourists even picked the tree branchs and flowers which are dynamy.That will let our environment more and more terrible. In a conclusion,tourism can bring harm to the environment and we should care more about our envirment.
