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Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars.,which is under heated discussion.Some deem that it is an effective way to control the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city.However,others hold the contrast idea .As fo me,I regard it a feasible way to carry out. First of all,the serious environmental pollution is partly on account of private cars' giving off exhaust fumes. Putting a “pollution tax” can effectively make a pollution reduction.And secondly,more and more people can afford to the private cars ,hence increasing private cars are springing up all over the world.Fewer private cars can bring about owing to the “pollution tax”. Moreover,it can strengthen people's awareness of protecting our environment. Taking into all account all the relevant factors,it is essential to put a “pollution tax” on private cars.And I strongly reckon the idea that everyone should take actions to make our environment a better place to live in.
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