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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11743
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars.,which is under heated discussion.Some deem that it is an effective way to control the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city.However,others hold the contrast idea .As fo me,I regard it a feasible way to carry out. First of all,the serious environmental pollution is partly on account of private cars' giving off exhaust fumes. Putting a “pollution tax” can effectively make a pollution reduction.And secondly,more and more people can afford to the private cars ,hence increasing private cars are springing up all over the world.Fewer private cars can bring about owing to the “pollution tax”. Moreover,it can strengthen people's awareness of protecting our environment. Taking into all account all the relevant factors,it is essential to put a “pollution tax” on private cars.And I strongly reckon the idea that everyone should take actions to make our environment a better place to live in.

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