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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From the chart, we can know the trues of leave of enducation. a man who has a degree of doctorl, his earn in a mouth only 1551, but if the degree is profeesional degree, it is 1665, both is well than the less than high school diploma. As we know, the socialti we live is cruelly, so we must have a degree to live.
