2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

On maintaining trust. Risk of trust become serious problem in our social.there are many people become selfishness and they don't trust anyone,so nobody to help others when old people fall to the ground because they don't trust the old man. the more trust and love in our socialty the more beautiful around of us.