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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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In nowadays,with the rapid developed of society,the trust become mere and more important.Especially when you are trading with someone ,conmunicating others,but how to maintaing trust ,that would be a question and the skill you should learn. there are some reasons we must be followed on maintaining trust.First of all,the trust is establish on two partys,remember do not lie to others ,or you will lose trust from others.Talking with friends as soon as possible ,secondly, keepiing your promises when you have arraged before.it's undesirable that breach of faith,told others the reasons if you could not obey the words.Do not make other that you are joking them.last but not least, to strengen yourself ,enhance your personal cultivation and have goodwill toward others. it's a long learing process on maintaining trust,only have we possess the trust ,then we could get well along with others.Without the trust ,it's easier to occured misunderstanding.

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